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On the ice,

On the ice, it's hard for even the world's best athletes

it's hard for even the world's best athletes to land

to land every move successfully.

every move successfully.

There are so many elements to consider.

But if you can do tricks

But if you can do tricks that other skaters never could,

that other skaters never could,

and if you can dance so beautifully and freely that it makes people forget you're on ice at all,

if you can dance so beautifully and freely

that it makes people forget you're on the ice at all,

that's real magic.

That's what it means to be a world-class figure skater.

In order to reach that beautiful moment,

little kids from all over jumped right in,

too young to realize that achieving their dreams means

too young to realize that achieving their dreams...

that they and their families will have to pay a great and terrible price.

means that they and their families will have to pay a great and terrible price.

A GENIUS ON THE ICE

Four o'clock already.

No wonder there are so many kids out on the ice.

Ow!

At least say you're sorry.

She's got to be about five.

If I had started when I was that young,

If I had started when I was that young, I'd be in a way more successful position right now.

I'd be in a way more successful position right now.

You're 14? And you're a total beginner?

You can just forget it.

I'm going home.

Came all the way from Yokohama because they said there was a skating job,

I came all the way from Yokohama because they said there was a skating job, but now they don't want to talk?

and now they don't even want to talk?

What am I supposed to do? Just hang around until tomorrow?

Guess I could go to a net café.

Guess I could go to an internet café.

Huh?

What's a kid doing behind the rental counter?

Okay. What's a kid doing behind the rental counter?

Hello there.

Sorry to bother you.

I just want to ask you a couple of questions.

I'd just like to ask you a couple of questions.

So, where are your parents?

Let's take a look at your entry ticket, why don't we?

Oh, dear. Did you pay?

Hey! Where are you going?

I have to have a whole ass job to pay for these entrance fees.

I have a whole-ass job to pay for these entrance fees.

I don't care if she is a little kid, no one skates for free on my watch!

Not even little kids skate for free on my watch!

You get back here!

- Please. Wait, sir. Let me explain. - What?

Please. Wait, sir. Let me explain.

What?

No way.

Dang it!

Come on. She can't have gotten that far yet.

Huh?

Must be hearing things.

Huh? Huh?

Hey! What do you think you're doing?

Get down from there.

Get down from—

Please don't die.

Stop crying. I'm fine.

You don't need to cry. I'm not hurt or any—

Really, I'm not hurt or any--

So you're giving bags of worms to the old guy at the reception desk,

and because he lets you into the rink with that,

and because he lets you into the rink with that, you're technically not skating for free.

you're technically not skating for free.

I'm telling you the truth!

Is that it? Because--

Please believe me. I'm telling you the truth!

He has lots of pet birds and so I dig them up.

See? I've got them right here.

Whoa! Okay! I believe you, now put them away.

I'd bet money he's just using that as an excuse to be nice to her.

I'm kind of surprised they managed to get away with it.

I'm kind of surprised they've been managing to get away with it.

No one's caught on?

Hey, uh, you're trembling pretty bad.

Are you feeling okay?

I don't like wiggly stuff like worms and snakes,

I don't like wiggly stuff like worms and snakes, so please keep those away from me forever.

so please keep those away from me forever.

Okay.

- Anyhow... - Huh?

Anyhow...

You did run away, which means that you must know what you're doing is wrong.

You ran away from me, which means that you must know what you're doing is wrong.

You really need to quit that.

If everyone tried to pay with worms, the skating rink would go broke.

- Okay. - At least she listens.

Okay.

Hmm? Hey.

At least she listens.

That book...

Oh, yes!

Woah! Talk about a blast from the past.

Talk about a blast from the past.

I had this book too.

These notes...

RIGHT LEG FORWARD/ OUTSIDE/THREE-TURN

Yeah. I really want to do figure skating.

But my mom says I can't because she doesn't want me to get hurt.

So I thought if I just followed the book, I could learn by myself.

- Have you told her that? - Huh?

Have you told her that?

Did you tell your mom how badly you want to skate?

Huh?

Have you told your mom how badly you want to skate?

Here, take this.

It's a list of phone numbers for all the figure skating clubs in Nagoya.

Talk to your mom and have her reach out

Talk to your mom and have her reach out to see which one might have the right program for you.

to see which one might have the right program for you.

Which skating club do you coach at? I could just go to yours.

Huh? Wait. Who, me?

Yeah.

Yeah?

I'm not a coach. You wouldn't want me anyway.

Huh?

It's already 6:00?

Anyway, no more worms. You hear me?

Anyway, no more worms, all right?

Yes, sir.

Y-Yes, sir.

- Hey, what grade are you in? - Huh?

Hey, what grade are you in?

The fifth.

F-Five.

So ten or 11?

So you're about ten or eleven?

If you're serious about going pro, you're right at the cutoff age.

I mean it. Talk to your mom first thing, okay?

See ya.

Hi, Mom.

Welcome back. You were out for a long time.

Yeah.

I want to ask. Can you--

Um, can—

I can't help you with your homework right now.

You've got homework to do, right?

I'll review it after dinner, okay?

You should get it done before you forget.

Okay.

O-Okay.

GROUP PRESENTATIONS

S-Sorry, what should I be doing?

Sorry, what should I be doing?

Huh?

You don't have to do anything.

You wouldn't be very good at it anyway.

It'll be fine. We can do the whole presentation ourselves.

You can just sit and wait.

Okay.

Did your drawing turn out good?

Yeah, it's good enough.

I just want to go skate.

I'll dig up a whole bunch of worms. Then I can skate as long as I want.

What you're doing is wrong, and I think you know it.

You're gonna have to cut that out.

If you're serious about going pro,

you're right at the cutoff age.

ICE SKATING RINK

An assistant coach?

Yeah.

The fact that you went to nationals for ice dancing,

The fact that you went to nationals for ice dancing, alongside the fact you did it with me,

and the fact that you did that with me,

means that if I recommend you for this, they're going to hire you on the spot.

if I recommend you for this, they're going to hire you on the spot.

I don't know.

- I don't know. - What?

What?

You don't want to?

I'm not qualified.

The only reason I made it to nationals in the first place was because of you.

Ice dancing is a two-person sport, Tsukasa.

Yeah. But that was just a fluke.

So what? You're going to work dead-end part-time jobs until you pass auditions?

Look, you're 26 years old and you're not making much of a living right now.

I'm not saying you should quit doing ice shows if that's what you want to do.

Only, being an assistant coach is just as good a skating job.

- Excuse me. - Huh?

Excuse me.

Are you Coach Takamine from Lux Higashiyama?

I'm Yuitsuka. I called earlier asking to meet.

Oh! Yes, hello!

I've been expecting you. Come in.

Oh, good. This won't take very long.

Inori.

What? Do you know this girl?

What? Do you know her?

Uh, yeah, kind of.

Then why don't you sit and talk with us?

I bet you'll pick up the coaching role before you even know it.

Here, want a snack?

I see you told her after all. Great job.

Great job talking to your mom.

Hmm?

Take a look. I recommend this school for beginners.

FIGURE SKATING SCHOOL

Take a look. I recommend this school for beginners.

The lesson fees here are low if she's enrolled once a week.

It would take a full two years for her to graduate though.

Oh, I see you've done your research.

Well, I know because my eldest daughter used to figure skate.

Oh, is that so?

Yes, I started her when she was only five.

She had worked so hard.

But she had an accident and had to quit.

You see? I couldn't bear to put Inori through all that too.

Besides, she's not doing very well in school.

Not to mention, she's not doing so well at school and her teachers are worried about her grades.

Her teachers have been worried about her grades for a long time already.

To add skating on top of all that would just be too much.

Then why are you--

Then why are you...

She's been so insistent about it.

So I'm taking her to different clubs.

I figured if the coaches tell her "no", then maybe she'll finally drop it.

I figured if the coaches tell her "no," then maybe she'll finally drop it.

Well, it's just a theory, but if she joins a club and starts private lessons--

Well, it's just a theory, but if she joins a club and starts private lessons—

What for?

Her sister did this for years, so I know how the figure skating world is.

There's no way she'll be able to catch up.

Her peers will all have started at five or six and she'll be left behind.

Inori, look out there.

See how good they are.

So small and already practicing jumps.

Think of how miserable you'd be if you joined them.

Wouldn't you be embarrassed?

You know what? Let's just see what she can do.

Uh, but...

I'm not ready to believe she's hopeless.

I'll decide that for myself.

Hey there, Coach. A word, please.

I'm sorry.

I-I'm sorry.

I couldn't just sit there and listen to that any longer.

I couldn't just sit there and listen to—

Check out the big brain on you, smarty.

You're going to butter up that kid and toss her right in the club, aren't ya?

See? I know what I'm talking about.

See? I knew you'd nail it.

You're going to be a great assistant coach.

No. My mouth just started moving

No. My mouth just started moving before I had a chance to think about what I was saying.

before I had a chance to think about what I was saying.

But be careful what you say to her!

The eyes of the ice moms are ever watchful.

If they think one of our coaches is playing favorites,

If they think one of our coaches is playing favorites, I'm never gonna hear the end of it.

I'm never gonna hear the end of it.

I know how loud you can get, so I need a verbal confirmation that you get it.

I know how loud you can get,

so I need a verbal confirmation that you get it.

Yeah. I got it.

Good. And I don't need to remind you how expensive figure skating can be

Good. And I don't need to remind you how expensive figure skating can be for those who take it seriously.

for those who take it seriously.

If she can't hack it, her family will suffer just as much as her.

Just keep that in mind.

I know.

Doesn't look like we have a 21 back there, so are you okay with a 22?

Uh-huh.

That is not a happy face.

I wish I could cheer her up, but I have to remember what Hitomi said.

- I'm really sorry. - Huh?

I'm really sorry.

I should have told my mom a long time ago,

Huh?

I should've told my mom a long time ago,

because if I had, maybe I would actually have a chance.

I wasted so much time.

If I had only started earlier...

Let's get these on.

Mm-hmm.

O-Okay.

I talked to you like I knew better,

I talked to you like I always knew better, but I couldn't tell my parents when I was young either.

but I couldn't tell my parents when I was young either.

Huh?

You're brave. Way more than you know.

All right. Are you ready?

I think so.

Yep!

Wait. What about her helmet?

Wait! What about her helmet?

Oh! Hey! Wait a sec!

Oh! Wait a—

She's fast.

She's just gliding, but it looks like she's leaving a trail of stars behind her.

Who is this girl?

She's a completely different person on the ice!

If you ask me, she's got it.

- Huh? - Huh?

And you're not forcing compliments just so she'll join the club, right?

Of course not.

No, of course not!

Tsukasa! Choose your words wisely!

Okay then. Let's test you on some of the basics.

Forward swizzle. Know it?

Do you know how to do a forward swizzle?

Yeah.

Yep!

Single forward.

Single forward swizzle.

Backward swizzle.

T-stop.

See, she doesn't need skating school!

Let's admit her to the club right now.

Let's admit her to the club right now!

Hey! Keep it down!

I don't know that I've ever been more stunned.

When did she get so good?

Two-foot slalom.

Forward crossover.

I'm telling you! She's a natural!

Would you stop yelling?

Yeah. She's got no fear in her at all.

I've already seen her do stuff that a normal beginner would be too scared to do.

I've already seen her do self-taught stuff that a normal beginner would be too scared to do.

All self-taught.

All right, what do you say we try a little skating?

Skating?

I thought that's what I was doing.

You are, but I'll show you how a figure skater moves all fancy and graceful.

Look here. You're going to be using both edges of the blade on the skates

Look here. You're going to be using both edges of the blade on the skates for different things.

for different things.

There's the inside edge, and the outside edge.

The inside edge and this is the outside edge.

The first step to skating is to distinguish how they're used to propel you.

The first step to skating

is to distinguish how they're used to propel you.

First, place your feet at a 45-degree angle. Like this.

Then, firmly bend your knees, stick your arms out.

Then, firmly bend your knees, and stick your arms out.

Now lean your ankle in towards your big toe,

Lean your ankle in toward your big toe, and now you're on the inside edge.

then you're on the inside edge.

And then push off the ice with the entire blade.

Now eventually, you'll be able to raise your free leg.

Now eventually, you'll be able to raise your free leg, which looks really cool.

That looks really cool.

But that takes muscle, so don't push yourself.

But that takes muscle, so don't push yourself at first.

His legs are so long.

Wow. Long legs.

Once you start moving, stretch the gliding leg all the way up

and bring your free leg in to meet it.

When you're steady on both legs,

When you're steady on both legs, you can lean your gliding leg to the inside edge this time

you can lean your gliding leg to the inside edge this time

and push off again.

Glide along until you're ready to bring that leg back in and repeat like so.

- Now you give it a try. - Uh, do my leg like this...

Now you give it a try.

Um, I'm not moving at all.

Uh, do my leg like this...

Am I doing this right?

A-Am I doing this right?

Yeah, if you lean forward like that, that's what puts on the brakes.

If you lean forward like that, that's what puts on the brakes.

Just try to keep your head up.

Keep my head...

My head...

Hey, kid! That looked painful. Are you okay?

H-Hey! Are you okay?

My mom was right. I guess I can't do this after all.

This girl's moods are kind of extreme.

This isn't something you can master on your first day.

No one can.

You have to find your center, keep practicing,

You have to find your center, keep practicing

and refine it every time you skate.

Before you know it, you'll be flying.

Let's try again.

Yeah!

Bend your knees and push!

Now try to straighten your leg out a little more.

Okay.

O-Okay.

She's picking it up so fast.

This is fun!

Inori, you're doing amazing!

What did you say? Did you just compliment me, Mom?

I said you're doing amazing.

You've really impressed me, Inori.

And it's so good to see you smile again.

- Does that mean that I can-- - Absolutely not.

Does that mean I can—

- What? - What?

Absolutely not.

What?

I've made up my mind.

And I do not want my daughter to figure skate.

- But you just-- - Inori's sister worked so hard.

But you just—

Inori's sister worked so hard.

From the time she was five, she had absolutely no time to play or be a kid.

She gave everything to this sport.

And in the end...

And in the end, she had nothing to show for it.

I just think Inori hasn't found a dream other than skating yet.

I want her to experience other things she could enjoy.

I don't want her time or money wasted.

I'm trying to do what's best for my daughter.

She's got a point.

It's going to be hard to start skating at 11.

I should know.

She could still find something with a lower barrier of entry.

I started late too.

- Something else she could love. - I...

I...

I don't like myself right now.

Inori?

Listen to me. I've always wanted...

I-I-I've...

I've always wanted to skate, no matter what it takes.

always wanted to skate, no matter what it takes.

I-I know that skating is really hard.

I know a lot of people quit. I get it.

And I know that I'm causing a lot of trouble for you, Mom.

And I know that I'm always causing a lot of trouble for you, Mom.

And my teachers too.

I feel so bad all the time.

I don't want to make you worry.

I don't want to complain.

And I know I'm not very good at anything.

But I've always wanted to do this!

It's the only thing that makes me happy!

When I think about skating, I can ignore all the bad stuff at school.

I get to think, "I could do something they can't."

But I can't do it either. I'm just faking it.

I'm just useless!

But I want to be better.

But I want to be better. I want to have something I'm not bad at.

I want to have something I'm not bad at.

Something I love where no one's going to talk down to me.

I want to have something that I'm actually good at.

I don't want to be embarrassed of myself!

I just want to skate.

I just want to skate!

- Ms. Yuitsuka. - Huh?

Ms. Yuitsuka.

Huh?

Let's just get her ass in here already.

Beg your pardon?

Watch your language!

Here's the thing.

I can't guarantee that she's going to become an Olympic athlete or anything.

And yet, she already has everything she needs to be successful as a figure skater.

She has dedication for the rink.

And it's true.

Figure skating takes up way more time and money than other extracurriculars do.

So if you want to overcome that,

your skater is going to need a lot of optimism and an iron will.

But the other children have been skating for so much longer.

You keep saying that, but look.

I wanna go home.

Most kids that age can't seriously practice a damn thing!

Most kids that age can't practice a damn thing.

I'm begging you, stop yelling.

You can't act like they're serious about it.

I'm begging, be quiet.

Am I stupid?

Why did I hesitate?

I should have jumped in way sooner.

I know how this girl feels better than anyone.

I know how she feels.

It never mattered how old or how insecure I was.

I wasn't going to give up!

What was it? What did I need back then?

What was I hoping for?

Screw it, then! If you let her stay, I'll teach her myself!

Screw it! If you let her stay, I'll teach her myself!

Let me be her skating coach! I'm begging!

I'm begging you to let me be her skating coach!

This girl has learned some much already entirely on her own.

Your daughter's learned so much already, entirely on her own!

She can absolutely still catch up!

She's got loads of talent, and I know she'll only get better.

She's not afraid to get hurt. She has great core strength.

She listens. And she has the ambition.

As long as you can bring her to practice, we can take care of the rest, okay?

As long as you can bring her to practice, we can take care of the rest!

I think your daughter is going to be an incredible skater some day.

I think your daughter is going to be an incredible skater someday!

In fact,

mark my words.

I'm going to make her a qualifier in the National Championship.

I'm going to make her a qualifier in the National Championship!

I'll do whatever it takes!

You really mean that?

Y-You really mean that?

Then sure, if you insist, Coach.

Let's do it!

Hell yeah!

Isn't that great?

Oh, hey, uh, what's your name?

Oh, uh, what's your name again?

- Inori. - Huh?

Inori.

I'm Inori Yuitsuka!

I'm Yuitsuka Inori!

That's a very good name.

That's an awesome name.

Rise.

Rise. Bow.

- Bow. - See you!

See you!

She took off. I've never seen her act like that before.

I've never seen her act like that before.

Yeah, she's been a lot happier than usual.

Yeah, she's seemed a lot happier recently.

I guess she has something fun going on.

Do you have any idea what you put me through?

The other parents have been breathing down my neck all week. It sucks.

The other parents have been breathing down my neck all week!

You can't make it sound like you're giving her preferential treatment.

You can't make it sound like you're giving her preferential treatment!

- Do you hear me? - What?

What?

Oh, yeah. Don't worry about it.

I get it.

Maybe I'll stop worrying about it when you stop making me worry about it,

Stop acting like you haven't done anything wrong, you absolute baboon.

you absolute baboon.

Coach Tsukasa!

- I'm here, Coach! - Huh?

Hey!

I'm ready to go!

Now that's a gold medal smile, kid!

What did I literally just tell you not to do?

What did we literally just talk about?!

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On the ice,
it's hard for even the world's best athletes to land
every move successfully.
There are so many elements to consider.
But if you can do tricks
that other skaters never could,
if you can dance so beautifully and freely
that it makes people forget you're on the ice at all,
that's real magic.
That's what it means to be a world-class figure skater.
In order to reach that beautiful moment,
little kids from all over jumped right in,
too young to realize that achieving their dreams means
that they and their families will have to pay a great and terrible price.
A GENIUS ON THE ICE
Four o'clock already.
No wonder there are so many kids out on the ice.
At least say you're sorry.
She's got to be about five.
If I had started when I was that young,
I'd be in a way more successful position right now.
You're 14? And you're a total beginner?
You can just forget it.
I'm going home.
Came all the way from Yokohama because they said there was a skating job,
and now they don't even want to talk?
What am I supposed to do? Just hang around until tomorrow?
Guess I could go to a net café.
Huh?
Okay. What's a kid doing behind the rental counter?
Hello there.
Sorry to bother you.
I just want to ask you a couple of questions.
So, where are your parents?
Let's take a look at your entry ticket, why don't we?
Oh, dear. Did you pay?
Hey! Where are you going?
I have to have a whole ass job to pay for these entrance fees.
I don't care if she is a little kid, no one skates for free on my watch!
You get back here!
- Please. Wait, sir. Let me explain. - What?
No way.
Dang it!
Come on. She can't have gotten that far yet.
Huh?
Must be hearing things.
Huh? Huh?
Hey! What do you think you're doing?
Get down from there.
Please don't die.
Stop crying. I'm fine.
Really, I'm not hurt or any--
So you're giving bags of worms to the old guy at the reception desk,
and because he lets you into the rink with that,
you're technically not skating for free.
Is that it? Because--
Please believe me. I'm telling you the truth!
He has lots of pet birds and so I dig them up.
See? I've got them right here.
Whoa! Okay! I believe you, now put them away.
I'd bet money he's just using that as an excuse to be nice to her.
I'm kind of surprised they managed to get away with it.
No one's caught on?
Hey, uh, you're trembling pretty bad.
Are you feeling okay?
I don't like wiggly stuff like worms and snakes,
so please keep those away from me forever.
Okay.
-  Anyhow... - Huh?
You did run away, which means that you must know what you're doing is wrong.
You really need to quit that.
If everyone tried to pay with worms, the skating rink would go broke.
- Okay. -  At least she listens.
Hmm? Hey.
That book...
Oh, yes!
Talk about a blast from the past.
I had this book too.
These notes...
RIGHT LEG FORWARD/ OUTSIDE/THREE-TURN
 Yeah. I really want to do figure skating.
But my mom says I can't because she doesn't want me to get hurt.
So I thought if I just followed the book, I could learn by myself.
- Have you told her that? - Huh?
Did you tell your mom how badly you want to skate?
Here, take this.
It's a list of phone numbers for all the figure skating clubs in Nagoya.
Talk to your mom and have her reach out
to see which one might have the right program for you.
Which skating club do you coach at? I could just go to yours.
Huh? Wait. Who, me?
Yeah.
I'm not a coach. You wouldn't want me anyway.
Huh?
It's already 6:00?
Anyway, no more worms. You hear me?
Yes, sir.
- Hey, what grade are you in? - Huh?
The fifth.
So ten or 11?
If you're serious about going pro, you're right at the cutoff age.
I mean it. Talk to your mom first thing, okay?
See ya.
Hi, Mom.
Welcome back. You were out for a long time.
Yeah.
I want to ask. Can you--
I can't help you with your homework right now.
I'll review it after dinner, okay?
Okay.
GROUP PRESENTATIONS
Sorry, what should I be doing?
Huh?
You don't have to do anything.
You wouldn't be very good at it anyway.
It'll be fine. We can do the whole presentation ourselves.
You can just sit and wait.
Okay.
Did your drawing turn out good?
Yeah, it's good enough.
I just want to go skate.
I'll dig up a whole bunch of worms. Then I can skate as long as I want.
What you're doing is wrong, and I think you know it.
You're gonna have to cut that out.
If you're serious about going pro,
you're right at the cutoff age.
ICE SKATING RINK
An assistant coach?
Yeah.
The fact that you went to nationals for ice dancing,
and the fact that you did that with me,
if I recommend you for this, they're going to hire you on the spot.
-  I don't know. - What?
You don't want to?
I'm not qualified.
The only reason I made it to nationals in the first place was because of you.
Ice dancing is a two-person sport, Tsukasa.
Yeah. But that was just a fluke.
So what? You're going to work dead-end part-time jobs until you pass auditions?
Look, you're 26 years old and you're not making much of a living right now.
I'm not saying you should quit doing ice shows if that's what you want to do.
Only, being an assistant coach is just as good a skating job.
-  Excuse me. -  Huh?
Are you Coach Takamine from Lux Higashiyama?
I'm Yuitsuka. I called earlier asking to meet.
Oh! Yes, hello!
I've been expecting you. Come in.
Oh, good. This won't take very long.
Inori.
What? Do you know this girl?
Uh, yeah, kind of.
Then why don't you sit and talk with us?
I bet you'll pick up the coaching role before you even know it.
Here, want a snack?
I see you told her after all. Great job.
Hmm?
FIGURE SKATING SCHOOL
 Take a look. I recommend this school for beginners.
The lesson fees here are low if she's enrolled once a week.
It would take a full two years for her to graduate though.
Oh, I see you've done your research.
Well, I know because my eldest daughter used to figure skate.
Oh, is that so?
Yes, I started her when she was only five.
She had worked so hard.
But she had an accident and had to quit.
You see? I couldn't bear to put Inori through all that too.
Besides, she's not doing very well in school.
Her teachers have been worried about her grades for a long time already.
To add skating on top of all that would just be too much.
Then why are you--
She's been so insistent about it.
So I'm taking her to different clubs.
I figured if the coaches tell her "no", then maybe she'll finally drop it.
Well, it's just a theory, but if she joins a club and starts private lessons--
What for?
Her sister did this for years, so I know how the figure skating world is.
There's no way she'll be able to catch up.
Her peers will all have started at five or six and she'll be left behind.
Inori, look out there.
See how good they are.
So small and already practicing jumps.
Think of how miserable you'd be if you joined them.
Wouldn't you be embarrassed?
You know what? Let's just see what she can do.
Uh, but...
I'm not ready to believe she's hopeless.
I'll decide that for myself.
Hey there, Coach. A word, please.
I'm sorry.
I couldn't just sit there and listen to that any longer.
Check out the big brain on you, smarty.
You're going to butter up that kid and toss her right in the club, aren't ya?
See? I know what I'm talking about.
You're going to be a great assistant coach.
No. My mouth just started moving
before I had a chance to think about what I was saying.
But be careful what you say to her!
The eyes of the ice moms are ever watchful.
If they think one of our coaches is playing favorites,
I'm never gonna hear the end of it.
I know how loud you can get,
so I need a verbal confirmation that you get it.
Yeah. I got it.
Good. And I don't need to remind you how expensive figure skating can be
for those who take it seriously.
If she can't hack it, her family will suffer just as much as her.
Just keep that in mind.
I know.
Doesn't look like we have a 21 back there, so are you okay with a 22?
Uh-huh.
That is not a happy face.
I wish I could cheer her up, but I have to remember what Hitomi said.
-  I'm really sorry. - Huh?
I should have told my mom a long time ago,
because if I had, maybe I would actually have a chance.
I wasted so much time.
If I had only started earlier...
Let's get these on.
Mm-hmm.
I talked to you like I knew better,
but I couldn't tell my parents when I was young either.
Huh?
You're brave. Way more than you know.
All right. Are you ready?
I think so.
Wait. What about her helmet?
Oh! Hey! Wait a sec!
She's fast.
She's just gliding, but it looks like she's leaving a trail of stars behind her.
Who is this girl?
She's a completely different person on the ice!
If you ask me, she's got it.
- Huh? - Huh?
And you're not forcing compliments just so she'll join the club, right?
Of course not.
Tsukasa! Choose your words wisely!
Okay then. Let's test you on some of the basics.
Forward swizzle. Know it?
Yeah.
Single forward.
Backward swizzle.
T-stop.
See, she doesn't need skating school!
Let's admit her to the club right now.
Hey! Keep it down!
I don't know that I've ever been more stunned.
When did she get so good?
Two-foot slalom.
Forward crossover.
I'm telling you! She's a natural!
Would you stop yelling?
Yeah. She's got no fear in her at all.
I've already seen her do stuff that a normal beginner would be too scared to do.
All self-taught.
All right, what do you say we try a little skating?
Skating?
I thought that's what I was doing.
You are, but I'll show you how a figure skater moves all fancy and graceful.
Look here. You're going to be using both edges of the blade on the skates
for different things.
The inside edge and this is the outside edge.
The first step to skating
is to distinguish how they're used to propel you.
First, place your feet at a 45-degree angle. Like this.
Then, firmly bend your knees, stick your arms out.
Now lean your ankle in towards your big toe,
then you're on the inside edge.
And then push off the ice with the entire blade.
Now eventually, you'll be able to raise your free leg.
That looks really cool.
But that takes muscle, so don't push yourself at first.
Wow. Long legs.
Once you start moving, stretch the gliding leg all the way up
and bring your free leg in to meet it.
When you're steady on both legs,
you can lean your gliding leg to the inside edge this time
and push off again.
Glide along until you're ready to bring that leg back in and repeat like so.
- Now you give it a try. -  Uh, do my leg like this...
Um, I'm not moving at all.
Am I doing this right?
Yeah, if you lean forward like that, that's what puts on the brakes.
Just try to keep your head up.
Keep my head...
Hey, kid! That looked painful. Are you okay?
My mom was right. I guess I can't do this after all.
This girl's moods are kind of extreme.
This isn't something you can master on your first day.
No one can.
You have to find your center, keep practicing
and refine it every time you skate.
Before you know it, you'll be flying.
Let's try again.
Yeah!
Bend your knees and push!
Now try to straighten your leg out a little more.
Okay.
She's picking it up so fast.
This is fun!
Inori, you're doing amazing!
What did you say? Did you just compliment me, Mom?
I said you're doing amazing.
You've really impressed me, Inori.
And it's so good to see you smile again.
-  Does that mean that I can-- - Absolutely not.
- What? - What?
I've made up my mind.
And I do not want my daughter to figure skate.
-  But you just-- - Inori's sister worked so hard.
From the time she was five, she had absolutely no time to play or be a kid.
She gave everything to this sport.
And in the end...
And in the end, she had nothing to show for it.
I just think Inori hasn't found a dream other than skating yet.
I want her to experience other things she could enjoy.
I don't want her time or money wasted.
I'm trying to do what's best for my daughter.
She's got a point.
It's going to be hard to start skating at 11.
I should know.
She could still find something with a lower barrier of entry.
- Something else she could love. -  I...
I don't like myself right now.
Inori?
Listen to me. I've always wanted...
I've always wanted to skate, no matter what it takes.
I-I know that skating is really hard.
I know a lot of people quit. I get it.
And I know that I'm causing a lot of trouble for you, Mom.
And my teachers too.
I feel so bad all the time.
I don't want to make you worry.
I don't want to complain.
And I know I'm not very good at anything.
But I've always wanted to do this!
It's the only thing that makes me happy!
When I think about skating, I can ignore all the bad stuff at school.
I get to think, "I could do something they can't."
But I can't do it either. I'm just faking it.
I'm just useless!
But I want to be better.
I want to have something I'm not bad at.
Something I love where no one's going to talk down to me.
I want to have something that I'm actually good at.
I don't want to be embarrassed of myself!
I just want to skate.
- Ms. Yuitsuka. - Huh?
Let's just get her ass in here already.
Beg your pardon?
Watch your language!
Here's the thing.
I can't guarantee that she's going to become an Olympic athlete or anything.
And yet, she already has everything she needs to be successful as a figure skater.
She has dedication for the rink.
And it's true.
Figure skating takes up way more time and money than other extracurriculars do.
So if you want to overcome that,
your skater is going to need a lot of optimism and an iron will.
But the other children have been skating for so much longer.
You keep saying that, but look.
I wanna go home.
Most kids that age can't practice a damn thing.
You can't act like they're serious about it.
I'm begging, be quiet.
Am I stupid?
Why did I hesitate?
I should have jumped in way sooner.
I know how this girl feels better than anyone.
It never mattered how old or how insecure I was.
I wasn't going to give up!
What was it? What did I need back then?
What was I hoping for?
Screw it, then! If you let her stay, I'll teach her myself!
Let me be her skating coach! I'm begging!
This girl has learned some much already entirely on her own.
She can absolutely still catch up!
She's got loads of talent, and I know she'll only get better.
She's not afraid to get hurt. She has great core strength.
She listens. And she has the ambition.
As long as you can bring her to practice, we can take care of the rest, okay?
I think your daughter is going to be an incredible skater some day.
In fact,
mark my words.
I'm going to make her a qualifier in the National Championship.
I'll do whatever it takes!
You really mean that?
Then sure, if you insist, Coach.
Let's do it!
Isn't that great?
Oh, hey, uh, what's your name?
- Inori. - Huh?
I'm Inori Yuitsuka!
That's a very good name.
Rise.
- Bow. -  See you!
She took off. I've never seen her act like that before.
Yeah, she's been a lot happier than usual.
I guess she has something fun going on.
Do you have any idea what you put me through?
The other parents have been breathing down my neck all week. It sucks.
You can't make it sound like you're giving her preferential treatment.
- Do you hear me? - What?
Oh, yeah. Don't worry about it.
Maybe I'll stop worrying about it when you stop making me worry about it,
you absolute baboon.
-  I'm here, Coach! - Huh?
I'm ready to go!
Now that's a gold medal smile, kid!
What did I literally just tell you not to do?

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On the ice, it's hard for even the world's best athletes
to land every move successfully.
There are so many elements to consider.
But if you can do tricks that other skaters never could,
and if you can dance so beautifully and freely that it makes people forget you're on ice at all,
that's real magic.
That's what it means to be a world-class figure skater.
In order to reach that beautiful moment,
little kids from all over jumped right in,
too young to realize that achieving their dreams...
means that they and their families will have to pay a great and terrible price.
Four o'clock already.
No wonder there are so many kids out on the ice.
Ow!
At least say you're sorry.
She's got to be about five.
If I had started when I was that young, I'd be in a way more successful position right now.
You're 14? And you're a total beginner?
You can just forget it.
I'm going home.
I came all the way from Yokohama because they said there was a skating job, but now they don't want to talk?
What am I supposed to do? Just hang around until tomorrow?
Guess I could go to an internet café.
What's a kid doing behind the rental counter?
Hello there.
Sorry to bother you.
I'd just like to ask you a couple of questions.
So, where are your parents?
Let's take a look at your entry ticket, why don't we?
Oh, dear. Did you pay?
Hey! Where are you going?
I have a whole-ass job to pay for these entrance fees.
Not even little kids skate for free on my watch!
You get back here!
Please. Wait, sir. Let me explain.
What?
No way.
Dang it!
Come on. She can't have gotten that far yet.
Must be hearing things.
Hey! What do you think you're doing?
Get down from—
Please don't die.
You don't need to cry. I'm not hurt or any—
So you're giving bags of worms to the old guy at the reception desk,
and because he lets you into the rink with that, you're technically not skating for free.
I'm telling you the truth!
He has lots of pet birds and so I dig them up.
See? I've got them right here.
Whoa! Okay! I believe you, now put them away.
I'd bet money he's just using that as an excuse to be nice to her.
I'm kind of surprised they've been managing to get away with it.
Hey, uh, you're trembling pretty bad.
Are you feeling okay?
I don't like wiggly stuff like worms and snakes, so please keep those away from me forever.
Okay.
Anyhow...
You ran away from me, which means that you must know what you're doing is wrong.
You really need to quit that.
If everyone tried to pay with worms, the skating rink would go broke.
Okay.
At least she listens.
That book...
Woah! Talk about a blast from the past.
I had this book too.
These notes...
Yeah. I really want to do figure skating.
But my mom says I can't because she doesn't want me to get hurt.
So I thought if I just followed the book, I could learn by myself.
Have you told her that?
Huh?
Have you told your mom how badly you want to skate?
Here, take this.
It's a list of phone numbers for all the figure skating clubs in Nagoya.
Talk to your mom and have her reach out to see which one might have the right program for you.
Which skating club do you coach at? I could just go to yours.
Huh? Wait. Who, me?
Yeah?
I'm not a coach. You wouldn't want me anyway.
It's already 6:00?
Anyway, no more worms, all right?
Y-Yes, sir.
Hey, what grade are you in?
F-Five.
So you're about ten or eleven?
If you're serious about going pro, you're right at the cutoff age.
I mean it. Talk to your mom first thing, okay?
See ya.
Hi, Mom.
Welcome back. You were out for a long time.
Yeah.
Um, can—
You've got homework to do, right?
You should get it done before you forget.
O-Okay.
S-Sorry, what should I be doing?
Huh?
You don't have to do anything.
You wouldn't be very good at it anyway.
It'll be fine. We can do the whole presentation ourselves.
You can just sit and wait.
Okay.
Did your drawing turn out good?
Yeah, it's good enough.
I just want to go skate.
I'll dig up a whole bunch of worms. Then I can skate as long as I want.
What you're doing is wrong, and I think you know it.
You're gonna have to cut that out.
If you're serious about going pro,
you're right at the cutoff age.
An assistant coach?
Yeah.
The fact that you went to nationals for ice dancing, alongside the fact you did it with me,
means that if I recommend you for this, they're going to hire you on the spot.
I don't know.
What?
You don't want to?
I'm not qualified.
The only reason I made it to nationals in the first place was because of you.
Ice dancing is a two-person sport, Tsukasa.
Yeah. But that was just a fluke.
So what? You're going to work dead-end part-time jobs until you pass auditions?
Look, you're 26 years old and you're not making much of a living right now.
I'm not saying you should quit doing ice shows if that's what you want to do.
Only, being an assistant coach is just as good a skating job.
Excuse me.
Are you Coach Takamine from Lux Higashiyama?
I'm Yuitsuka. I called earlier asking to meet.
Oh! Yes, hello!
I've been expecting you. Come in.
Oh, good. This won't take very long.
Inori.
What? Do you know her?
Uh, yeah, kind of.
Then why don't you sit and talk with us?
I bet you'll pick up the coaching role before you even know it.
Here, want a snack?
Great job talking to your mom.
Take a look. I recommend this school for beginners.
The lesson fees here are low if she's enrolled once a week.
It would take a full two years for her to graduate though.
Oh, I see you've done your research.
Well, I know because my eldest daughter used to figure skate.
Oh, is that so?
Yes, I started her when she was only five.
She had worked so hard.
But she had an accident and had to quit.
You see? I couldn't bear to put Inori through all that too.
Not to mention, she's not doing so well at school and her teachers are worried about her grades.
To add skating on top of all that would just be too much.
Then why are you...
She's been so insistent about it.
So I'm taking her to different clubs.
I figured if the coaches tell her "no," then maybe she'll finally drop it.
Well, it's just a theory, but if she joins a club and starts private lessons—
What for?
Her sister did this for years, so I know how the figure skating world is.
There's no way she'll be able to catch up.
Her peers will all have started at five or six and she'll be left behind.
Inori, look out there.
See how good they are.
So small and already practicing jumps.
Think of how miserable you'd be if you joined them.
Wouldn't you be embarrassed?
You know what? Let's just see what she can do.
Uh, but...
I'm not ready to believe she's hopeless.
I'll decide that for myself.
Hey there, Coach. A word, please.
I-I'm sorry.
I couldn't just sit there and listen to—
Check out the big brain on you, smarty.
You're going to butter up that kid and toss her right in the club, aren't ya?
See? I knew you'd nail it.
You're going to be a great assistant coach.
No. My mouth just started moving before I had a chance to think about what I was saying.
But be careful what you say to her!
The eyes of the ice moms are ever watchful.
If they think one of our coaches is playing favorites, I'm never gonna hear the end of it.
I know how loud you can get, so I need a verbal confirmation that you get it.
Yeah. I got it.
Good. And I don't need to remind you how expensive figure skating can be for those who take it seriously.
If she can't hack it, her family will suffer just as much as her.
Just keep that in mind.
I know.
Doesn't look like we have a 21 back there, so are you okay with a 22?
Uh-huh.
That is not a happy face.
I wish I could cheer her up, but I have to remember what Hitomi said.
I'm really sorry.
Huh?
I should've told my mom a long time ago,
because if I had, maybe I would actually have a chance.
I wasted so much time.
If I had only started earlier...
Let's get these on.
O-Okay.
I talked to you like I always knew better, but I couldn't tell my parents when I was young either.
You're brave. Way more than you know.
All right. Are you ready?
Yep!
Wait! What about her helmet?
Oh! Wait a—
She's fast.
She's just gliding, but it looks like she's leaving a trail of stars behind her.
Who is this girl?
She's a completely different person on the ice!
If you ask me, she's got it.
And you're not forcing compliments just so she'll join the club, right?
No, of course not!
Tsukasa! Choose your words wisely!
Okay then. Let's test you on some of the basics.
Do you know how to do a forward swizzle?
Yep!
Single forward swizzle.
Backward swizzle.
T-stop.
See, she doesn't need skating school!
Let's admit her to the club right now!
Hey! Keep it down!
I don't know that I've ever been more stunned.
When did she get so good?
Two-foot slalom.
Forward crossover.
I'm telling you! She's a natural!
Would you stop yelling?
Yeah. She's got no fear in her at all.
I've already seen her do self-taught stuff that a normal beginner would be too scared to do.
All right, what do you say we try a little skating?
Skating?
I thought that's what I was doing.
You are, but I'll show you how a figure skater moves all fancy and graceful.
Look here. You're going to be using both edges of the blade on the skates for different things.
There's the inside edge, and the outside edge.
The first step to skating is to distinguish how they're used to propel you.
First, place your feet at a 45-degree angle. Like this.
Then, firmly bend your knees, and stick your arms out.
Lean your ankle in toward your big toe, and now you're on the inside edge.
And then push off the ice with the entire blade.
Now eventually, you'll be able to raise your free leg, which looks really cool.
But that takes muscle, so don't push yourself.
His legs are so long.
Once you start moving, stretch the gliding leg all the way up
and bring your free leg in to meet it.
When you're steady on both legs, you can lean your gliding leg to the inside edge this time
and push off again.
Glide along until you're ready to bring that leg back in and repeat like so.
Now you give it a try.
Uh, do my leg like this...
A-Am I doing this right?
If you lean forward like that, that's what puts on the brakes.
Just try to keep your head up.
My head...
H-Hey! Are you okay?
My mom was right. I guess I can't do this after all.
This girl's moods are kind of extreme.
This isn't something you can master on your first day.
You have to find your center, keep practicing,
and refine it every time you skate.
Before you know it, you'll be flying.
Let's try again.
Yeah!
Bend your knees and push!
Now try to straighten your leg out a little more.
O-Okay.
She's picking it up so fast.
This is fun!
Inori, you're doing amazing!
What did you say? Did you just compliment me, Mom?
I said you're doing amazing.
You've really impressed me, Inori.
And it's so good to see you smile again.
Does that mean I can—
Absolutely not.
What?
I've made up my mind.
And I do not want my daughter to figure skate.
But you just—
Inori's sister worked so hard.
From the time she was five, she had absolutely no time to play or be a kid.
She gave everything to this sport.
And in the end...
And in the end, she had nothing to show for it.
I just think Inori hasn't found a dream other than skating yet.
I want her to experience other things she could enjoy.
I don't want her time or money wasted.
I'm trying to do what's best for my daughter.
She's got a point.
It's going to be hard to start skating at 11.
I should know.
I started late too.
I...
I don't like myself right now.
Inori?
I-I-I've...
always wanted to skate, no matter what it takes.
I-I know that skating is really hard.
I know a lot of people quit. I get it.
And I know that I'm always causing a lot of trouble for you, Mom.
I feel so bad all the time.
I don't want to make you worry.
I don't want to complain.
And I know I'm not very good at anything.
But I've always wanted to do this!
It's the only thing that makes me happy!
When I think about skating, I can ignore all the bad stuff at school.
I get to think, "I could do something they can't."
But I can't do it either. I'm just faking it.
I'm just useless!
But I want to be better. I want to have something I'm not bad at.
Something I love where no one's going to talk down to me.
I want to have something that I'm actually good at.
I don't want to be embarrassed of myself!
I just want to skate!
Ms. Yuitsuka.
Huh?
Let's just get her ass in here already.
Beg your pardon?
Watch your language!
Here's the thing.
I can't guarantee that she's going to become an Olympic athlete or anything.
And yet, she already has everything she needs to be successful as a figure skater.
She has dedication for the rink.
And it's true.
Figure skating takes up way more time and money than other extracurriculars do.
So if you want to overcome that,
your skater is going to need a lot of optimism and an iron will.
But the other children have been skating for so much longer.
You keep saying that, but look.
Most kids that age can't seriously practice a damn thing!
I'm begging you, stop yelling.
Am I stupid?
Why did I hesitate?
I should have jumped in way sooner.
I know how she feels.
It never mattered how old or how insecure I was.
I wasn't going to give up!
What was it? What did I need back then?
What was I hoping for?
Screw it! If you let her stay, I'll teach her myself!
I'm begging you to let me be her skating coach!
Your daughter's learned so much already, entirely on her own!
She can absolutely still catch up!
She's got loads of talent, and I know she'll only get better.
She's not afraid to get hurt. She has great core strength.
She listens. And she has the ambition.
As long as you can bring her to practice, we can take care of the rest!
I think your daughter is going to be an incredible skater someday!
In fact,
mark my words.
I'm going to make her a qualifier in the National Championship!
I'll do whatever it takes!
Y-You really mean that?
Then sure, if you insist, Coach.
Hell yeah!
Isn't that great?
Oh, uh, what's your name again?
Inori.
I'm Yuitsuka Inori!
That's an awesome name.
Rise. Bow.
See you!
I've never seen her act like that before.
Yeah, she's seemed a lot happier recently.
I guess she has something fun going on.
Do you have any idea what you put me through?
The other parents have been breathing down my neck all week!
You can't make it sound like you're giving her preferential treatment!
What?
I get it.
Stop acting like you haven't done anything wrong, you absolute baboon.
Coach Tsukasa!
Hey!
Now that's a gold medal smile, kid!
What did we literally just talk about?!

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