The Apothecary Diaries ED1 Edit
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| Words removed | 27 |
| Total words | 97 |
| Words removed (%) | 27.84 |
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15 additions
| Words added | 39 |
| Total words | 109 |
| Words added (%) | 35.78 |
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Not just some superficial sweetness
I don't want some superficial sweetness
I want more warmth than I can even use, oh
Oh, I want more warmth than I can even use
Having these selfish idealistic thoughts
I caught myself thinking these selfish thoughts again
I swallowed them again today before putting them into words
But swallowed them down before I could put them into words
Still in my memories, the scent of fragrant olive
Oh, I still remember the smell of olive in the air
The color of twilight in the city
How the colors of twilight painted the town square
We were laughing...
And how we were laughing then
Filled with sadness, the tears welled up in my eyes
Filled with sadness, the tears welled up in my eyes
I found a glow during those days
I found a light during those days
I guess I took everything for granted
I guess I took everything for granted
The wind was so loud I covered my ears
The wind was so loud I covered my ears
I gotta stop being like that
I gotta stop being like that
Even if I stumble over the words of love
Even if I stumble over the words of love