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# SobsPlease v1
# SobsPlease v2
They're so cool!
They're so cool!
What, you wanna get one too?
What, you wanna get one too?
I've never even tried playing the guitar,
I've never even tried playing the guitar,
but maybe I'd manage?
but maybe I'd manage?
I could be like Momoka!
I could be like Momoka!
Stop dreaming.
Stop dreaming.
You have no idea how to play.
You have no idea how to play.
It'd be too much with your singing.
It'd be too much with your singing.
She's not even listening.
She's not even listening.
Well, it's fine. Everyone gets like this after their first concert.
Well, it's fine. Everyone gets like this after their first concert.
Gosh. Look at her, completely hooked.
Gosh. Look at her, completely hooked.
I vented all of my thoughts and feelings.
I vented all of my thoughts and feelings.
I put everything I had into it: all my strength and all my skill.
I put everything I had into it: all my strength and all my skill.
I'd never done anything like that before.
I'd never done anything like that before.
I'm usually too self-conscious,
I'm usually too self-conscious,
and I always feel like something's stuck in my throat.
and I always feel like something's stuck in my throat.
So for me, this was...
So for me, this was...
Nina!
Nina!
Practice time.
Practice time.
Coming!
Coming!
Okay, stop here.
Okay, stop here.
Looking good?
Looking good?
I'd say so.
I'd say so.
Let's listen.
Let's listen.
I'll crush it
I'll crush it
I still don't have the guts
I still don't have the guts
Would someone out there hurry up
Would someone out there hurry up
and offer me a reason for my life to carry on
and offer me a reason for my life to carry on
Sounds great!
Sounds great!
I look around and see
I look around and see
Nina, when you start the chorus, could you vary your intonation a little more?
Nina, when you start the chorus, could you vary your intonation a little more?
Would someone out there hurry up and offer me a reason for my life to—
Would someone out there hurry up and offer me a reason for my life to—
Like that?
Like that?
Yeah. It felt a little too precise.
Yeah. It felt a little too precise.
Also, I wanna retake the drums.
Also, I wanna retake the drums.
What? Like, right now?
What? Like, right now?
I have to wake up early tomorrow, you know.
I have to wake up early tomorrow, you know.
Diamond Dust?
Diamond Dust?
Yeah, I saw she was looking them up.
Yeah, I saw she was looking them up.
I think she might be comparing us.
I think she might be comparing us.
Okay, but aren't they really big now?
Okay, but aren't they really big now?
Well, yeah, they are.
Well, yeah, they are.
If that's what she wanted,
If that's what she wanted,
she wouldn't have formed a band with amateurs like us.
she wouldn't have formed a band with amateurs like us.
But...
But...
No way.
No way.
No way!
No way!
What's wrong?
What's wrong?
Sorry, I have to go!
Sorry, I have to go!
See you tomorrow!
See you tomorrow!
She still hasn't read it.
She still hasn't read it.
Boyfriend, I guess?
Boyfriend, I guess?
Though I didn't think she had one.
Though I didn't think she had one.
Maybe an ex wants to reconnect or something?
Maybe an ex wants to reconnect or something?
What are you saying?!
What are you saying?!
Why're you so worked up about it?
Why're you so worked up about it?
I-I mean...
I-I mean...
You really think it's that?
You really think it's that?
Girls who do music are popular among male musicians.
Girls who do music are popular among male musicians.
They're the easy prey, you see.
They're the easy prey, you see.
Prey?
Prey?
Stay wary, Nina.
Stay wary, Nina.
I'll call her.
I'll call her.
She won't pick up.
She won't pick up.
Wait until tomorrow.
Wait until tomorrow.
We shouldn't try to manage each other's relationships and jobs.
We shouldn't try to manage each other's relationships and jobs.
How do you feel, Momoka?
How do you feel, Momoka?
About the current Diamond Dust.
About the current Diamond Dust.
Nothing, really.
Nothing, really.
How can it be nothing?
How can it be nothing?
I don't hold a grudge, if that's what you're asking.
I don't hold a grudge, if that's what you're asking.
If they sell well, then I'm happy for them.
If they sell well, then I'm happy for them.
Why did you leave, then?
Why did you leave, then?
Does it matter?
Does it matter?
Don't worry about me. Worry about singing instead.
Don't worry about me. Worry about singing instead.
Momoka. Tell me about them.
Momoka. Tell me about them.
Can't you just drop it?
Can't you just drop it?
I really want to know.
I really want to know.
There.
There.
We started out as a school band.
We started out as a school band.
But every one of us was very skilled and passionate.
But every one of us was very skilled and passionate.
Our goals aligned, and we felt as if fate had brought us together.
Our goals aligned, and we felt as if fate had brought us together.
It was like a miracle at work.
It was like a miracle at work.
Gave us goosebumps!
Gave us goosebumps!
And we were right.
And we were right.
During our first school festival,
During our first school festival,
so many people came to hear us that they almost couldn't fit into the gym.
so many people came to hear us that they almost couldn't fit into the gym.
They saved us for last, and it was awesome.
They saved us for last, and it was awesome.
We said "Let's go pro! No turning back!", quit school,
We said "Let's go pro! No turning back!", quit school,
came here, got a CD out as indies,
came here, got a CD out as indies,
did concerts, and were about to sign with a major label.
did concerts, and were about to sign with a major label.
Then, I left.
Then, I left.
Momoka...
Momoka...
I've never seen you smile like this.
I've never seen you smile like this.
I'm sorry! I wasn't sleeping!
I'm sorry! I wasn't sleeping!
I could've slept in my bed instead...
I could've slept in my bed instead...
It's from Subaru!
It's from Subaru!
Huh? What?!
What?!
What?!
I don't think we should be butting in.
I don't think we should be butting in.
Why?
Why?
We said we'd make music together, the three of us!
We said we'd make music together, the three of us!
Are you just going to give up on her?
Are you just going to give up on her?
I'm not giving up on her.
I'm not giving up on her.
If she values the band more, she'll dump him and come back.
If she values the band more, she'll dump him and come back.
If we blindly butt into this, it'll only mean more drama.
If we blindly butt into this, it'll only mean more drama.
Will it really?
Will it really?
Haven't you ever dated a guy?
Haven't you ever dated a guy?
Have you?
Have you?
I'm sorry, excuse me?
I'm sorry, excuse me?
What on earth are you doing?
What on earth are you doing?
This place just fills me with unease.
This place just fills me with unease.
You're our leader, so you take point.
You're our leader, so you take point.
Since when?!
Since when?!
Also, Subaru's completely unbearable when she's in school mode.
Also, Subaru's completely unbearable when she's in school mode.
We've got to stay calm.
We've got to stay calm.
My!
My!
Subaru?
Subaru?
Yeah...
Yeah...
This way, Grandmother.
This way, Grandmother.
I'll be right behind you.
I'll be right behind you.
May I help you?
May I help you?
Suba—
Suba—
You're lost?
You're lost?
Excuse me, Grandmother. Allow me to give them directions.
Excuse me, Grandmother. Allow me to give them directions.
Why are you here?!
Why are you here?!
What did you expect?! That message was so out of nowhere!
What did you expect?! That message was so out of nowhere!
I'll explain everything later!
I'll explain everything later!
For now, leave!
For now, leave!
At least tell us the reason, then!
At least tell us the reason, then!
Why won't you just liste—
Why won't you just liste—
And who might they be?
And who might they be?
Grandmother?
Grandmother?
They're my friends.
They're my friends.
Fellow actresses.
Fellow actresses.
Actresses?
Actresses?
Isn't that right?
Isn't that right?
I have to admit, this atmosphere is rather lively.
I have to admit, this atmosphere is rather lively.
Because the city's quite crowded.
Because the city's quite crowded.
Right?
Right?
Subaru.
Subaru.
Your posture.
Your posture.
Yes, ma'am!
Yes, ma'am!
Haven't I explained how important it is to maintain good posture?
Haven't I explained how important it is to maintain good posture?
All your mannerisms, the way you conduct yourself, reflect in your acting.
All your mannerisms, the way you conduct yourself, reflect in your acting.
Keep both your minds and bodies healthy at all times.
Keep both your minds and bodies healthy at all times.
Yes, Grandmother!
Yes, Grandmother!
You girls as well.
You girls as well.
If you notice Subaru lacking in discipline, don't hesitate to let her know.
If you notice Subaru lacking in discipline, don't hesitate to let her know.
Excuse me for a moment.
Excuse me for a moment.
Subaru!
Subaru!
I know.
I know.
Is that the famous actress, Awa Tendou?
Is that the famous actress, Awa Tendou?
You only noticed now?
You only noticed now?
I mean, it's not like anyone told me.
I mean, it's not like anyone told me.
That's right. She's my grandma.
That's right. She's my grandma.
She suddenly came here yesterday and said she was visiting.
She suddenly came here yesterday and said she was visiting.
Wait. Your family's in show biz?
Wait. Your family's in show biz?
Not exactly, no.
Not exactly, no.
My parents work normal jobs.
My parents work normal jobs.
But you don't want to be an actress!
But you don't want to be an actress!
I don't!
I don't!
And I've already explained to you that I can't tell her!
And I've already explained to you that I can't tell her!
Then why did you tell us you're quitting the band?!
Then why did you tell us you're quitting the band?!
My emotions got the better of me, I guess?
My emotions got the better of me, I guess?
Or rather, to deceive your enemies, you first need to deceive your allies...
Or rather, to deceive your enemies, you first need to deceive your allies...
What's that supposed to—
What's that supposed to—
Either way!
Either way!
It was necessary for her not to see through me.
It was necessary for her not to see through me.
She seems like such a kind grandma, though.
She seems like such a kind grandma, though.
On the surface, yeah.
On the surface, yeah.
She's originally from Kyoto,
She's originally from Kyoto,
so if you take her at face value, you'll burn yourself.
so if you take her at face value, you'll burn yourself.
Really?
Really?
Posture.
Posture.
Yes, ma'am!
Yes, ma'am!
We shouldn't linger.
We shouldn't linger.
I'd like to see how much your acting's improved.
I'd like to see how much your acting's improved.
Sure?
Sure?
Could I ask you to perform with her for me?
Could I ask you to perform with her for me?
P-Pardon?
P-Pardon?
Wh-What is it?
Wh-What is it?
A-A-Actually, I wanted to tell you how much I love you.
A-A-Actually, I wanted to tell you how much I love you.
Stop laughing.
Stop laughing.
Improv?
Improv?
Yes, an improvised romantic scene.
Yes, an improvised romantic scene.
You confess your love to her,
You confess your love to her,
but your ex-girlfriend Subaru comes along to reclaim you.
but your ex-girlfriend Subaru comes along to reclaim you.
A-Alright.
A-Alright.
Sounds wonderful, Grandmother!
Sounds wonderful, Grandmother!
Let's head back to your school and give it a try.
Let's head back to your school and give it a try.
Would that be alright?
Would that be alright?
It would not.
It would not.
Sorry, what was that, Nina? I didn't quite catch it.
Sorry, what was that, Nina? I didn't quite catch it.
Why won't you listen for once?!
Why won't you listen for once?!
Want me in the band? Do it!
Want me in the band? Do it!
Put away the phones, please. You're supposed to improvise.
Put away the phones, please. You're supposed to improvise.
Sorry!
Sorry!
Let us be on our way, then.
Let us be on our way, then.
Wait!
Wait!
Y-You're...
Y-You're...
I shall deceive myself no more!
I shall deceive myself no more!
My love for you still burns strong!
My love for you still burns strong!
Then why did you leave to begin with?
Then why did you leave to begin with?
Pardon?
Pardon?
I was completely serious about us from the start.
I was completely serious about us from the start.
I thought we would always be together.
I thought we would always be together.
How could you say goodbye like we were nothing?
How could you say goodbye like we were nothing?
I-I mean...
I-I mean...
Why did you do it?!
Why did you do it?!
Were you lying when you said you cared?!
Were you lying when you said you cared?!
No, I really did care, but...
No, I really did care, but...
Explain, then!
Explain, then!
That was nasty!
That was nasty!
Your improv was just venting at me!
Your improv was just venting at me!
And who's to blame for that?
And who's to blame for that?
I know.
I know.
I don't really want to quit the band.
I don't really want to quit the band.
Besides, when it comes to acting,
Besides, when it comes to acting,
Everyone just sees me as Awa Tendou's granddaughter.
everyone just sees me as Awa Tendou's granddaughter.
But...
But...
What?
What?
It doesn't add up.
It doesn't add up.
My grandma wouldn't just stop by like that.
My grandma wouldn't just stop by like that.
She always carefully plans everything beforehand.
She always carefully plans everything beforehand.
This is it!
This is it!
Girls Band Cry.
Girls Band Cry.
You got cast in a drama?!
You got cast in a drama?!
The feedback! Stop talking through the mic!
The feedback! Stop talking through the mic!
I didn't want the role! My grandma's making me do it!
I didn't want the role! My grandma's making me do it!
It's only a minor role, so I should be done within a week.
It's only a minor role, so I should be done within a week.
But I won't be able to practice.
But I won't be able to practice.
Okay.
Okay.
How is that okay?!
How is that okay?!
You sometimes don't come to practice because you have to study, too!
You sometimes don't come to practice because you have to study, too!
That's not the same.
That's not the same.
Of course it is!
Of course it is!
It's not!
It's not!
Stop fighting.
Stop fighting.
So you don't care if we lose Subaru?
So you don't care if we lose Subaru?
These things happen.
These things happen.
But...
But...
What are you mad about now?
What are you mad about now?
You being inconsiderate, Momoka.
You being inconsiderate, Momoka.
From my perspective, you're the inconsiderate one, Nina!
From my perspective, you're the inconsiderate one, Nina!
I told you, I'll be back!
I told you, I'll be back!
Show some trust, please!
Show some trust, please!
But...
But...
Listen here.
Listen here.
People have stuff going on that they don't want to talk about.
People have stuff going on that they don't want to talk about.
You wouldn't want us asking you why you came here, right?
You wouldn't want us asking you why you came here, right?
I mean...
I mean...
We're wasting time.
We're wasting time.
I guess we should retake Subaru's drums first.
I guess we should retake Subaru's drums first.
You can leave, Nina.
You can leave, Nina.
What's wrong with her? I'm the inconsiderate one?
What's wrong with her? I'm the inconsiderate one?
Grr.
Grr.
Free tomorrow?
Free tomorrow?
I'm not!
I'm not!
Sorry! I am!
Sorry! I am!
Why are we here?
Why are we here?
My apartment.
My apartment.
Come on in.
Come on in.
Oh, wow...
Oh, wow...
You get used to it real quick.
You get used to it real quick.
Tea fine?
Tea fine?
Ah, sure.
Ah, sure.
You can sit wherever you like.
You can sit wherever you like.
That one's great for gaming.
That one's great for gaming.
Thanks.
Thanks.
Look at this.
Look at this.
She's so pretty...
She's so pretty...
I figured you'd end up getting mad at me again if I don't explain.
I figured you'd end up getting mad at me again if I don't explain.
This movie's title is where my name comes from.
This movie's title is where my name comes from.
It was my grandma's choice.
It was my grandma's choice.
Is this her?
Is this her?
Yup.
Yup.
I'm told this is the movie that made her famous.
I'm told this is the movie that made her famous.
I don't know much about it though, since I wasn't born yet.
I don't know much about it though, since I wasn't born yet.
My name was supposed to bring me good luck.
My name was supposed to bring me good luck.
A charm for becoming an actress.
A charm for becoming an actress.
But you don't want that, do you?
But you don't want that, do you?
How could I?
How could I?
I'm sick of the preferential treatment I always get because of my grandma.
I'm sick of the preferential treatment I always get because of my grandma.
I don't even like acting.
I don't even like acting.
It's embarrassing.
It's embarrassing.
Thing is...
Thing is...
When I tell her I'll follow in her footsteps,
When I tell her I'll follow in her footsteps,
she smiles.
she smiles.
It's the only time she shows a real smile,
It's the only time she shows a real smile,
and not a fake one.
and not a fake one.
What do you think?
What do you think?
What would you do in my shoes?
What would you do in my shoes?
Nina.
Nina.
Do you get me now, you difficult thing?
Do you get me now, you difficult thing?
But you can't keep dragging it out.
But you can't keep dragging it out.
If you don't want to be an actress, you should tell her, and soon.
If you don't want to be an actress, you should tell her, and soon.
True.
True.
I'm serious!
I'm serious!
I thought I'd go to acting school, she'd find out I have no talent,
I thought I'd go to acting school, she'd find out I have no talent,
and then she'd give up on me, you know!
and then she'd give up on me, you know!
See you.
See you.
Bye.
Bye.
Don't worry. I won't quit the band.
Don't worry. I won't quit the band.
Really?
Really?
When we did that concert, it struck me.
When we did that concert, it struck me.
I actually like making music even more than I thought.
I actually like making music even more than I thought.
Look, I'm being honest with you here, so say something!
Look, I'm being honest with you here, so say something!
What's that?
What's that?
I'm sorry. Nina.
I'm sorry. Nina.
Shouldn't get mad in the first place if you're gonna regret it, sheesh.
Shouldn't get mad in the first place if you're gonna regret it, sheesh.
The Case Files of a Grandma Detective: Part Six!
The Case Files of a Grandma Detective: Part Six!
Featuring Detective Grandma, Mrs. Awa Tendou!
Featuring Detective Grandma, Mrs. Awa Tendou!
Pleased to be here.
Pleased to be here.
I'm her granddaughter, Subaru.
I'm her granddaughter, Subaru.
I'll be playing the clerk.
I'll be playing the clerk.
Thank you for the opportunity.
Thank you for the opportunity.
They use so much make-up.
They use so much make-up.
It makes their faces easier to make out.
It makes their faces easier to make out.
Bands do that too, you know.
Bands do that too, you know.
They do?
They do?
Sometimes, yeah.
Sometimes, yeah.
Whatever you're thinking, don't.
Whatever you're thinking, don't.
And... action!
And... action!
You think she'll tell her?
You think she'll tell her?
Yeah, she said she would.
Yeah, she said she would.
She'll probably be dropping out of acting school,
She'll probably be dropping out of acting school,
so she might go home for a bit, but she wants to stay in the band.
so she might go home for a bit, but she wants to stay in the band.
Didn't know it's that big of a deal.
Didn't know it's that big of a deal.
Maybe we shouldn't force her to do this.
Maybe we shouldn't force her to do this.
I thought so too,
I thought so too,
but she did feel like she'd have to tell her eventually anyway.
but she did feel like she'd have to tell her eventually anyway.
And cut!
And cut!
Take five!
Take five!
Is it done?
Is it done?
Yes, this is all for today.
Yes, this is all for today.
We're finally performing together.
We're finally performing together.
I'm happy for you.
I'm happy for you.
It's always been a dream of mine.
It's always been a dream of mine.
I've always wanted to perform with my granddaughter.
I've always wanted to perform with my granddaughter.
So you really do want her to be an actress?
So you really do want her to be an actress?
Of course.
Of course.
Subaru is the name of the movie that kicked off my career.
Subaru is the name of the movie that kicked off my career.
You see,
You see,
my daughter deeply resents my job.
my daughter deeply resents my job.
I was away more often than not,
I was away more often than not,
and couldn't do much for my family despite my status and wealth.
and couldn't do much for my family despite my status and wealth.
So hearing Subaru say she loved my job really brought a smile to my face
So hearing Subaru say she loved my job really brought a smile to my face.
She was the only one to think well of me.
She was the only one to think well of me.
Only she appreciated what I did.
Only she appreciated what I did.
She wanted to try it herself.
She wanted to try it herself.
And I feel grateful for it.
And I feel grateful for it.
And cut!
And cut!
Take five!
Take five!
Let me look at the footage.
Let me look at the footage.
Grandmother!
Grandmother!
Good job.
Good job.
Um... I'd like to tell you something.
Um... I'd like to tell you something.
Yes? What is it?
Yes? What is it?
I wanted to wait until later,
I wanted to wait until later,
but you need to catch the train, don't you?
but you need to catch the train, don't you?
I do. I'll have to get going soon.
I do. I'll have to get going soon.
Right.
Right.
Then I'll say it now.
Then I'll say it now.
You see...
You see...
Um...
Um...
I actually...
I actually...
Grandmother.
Grandmother.
I...
I...
I actually...
I actually...
Subaru! Emergency!
Subaru! Emergency!
I completely forgot! We have to go!
I completely forgot! We have to go!
You're needed elsewhere. Right now. Right this instant.
You're needed elsewhere. Right now. Right this instant.
Wait! What?
Wait! What?
Ow! Hold on!
Ow! Hold on!
Don't push me!
Don't push me!
Ow! What is it?
Ow! What is it?
Can you make up your goddamn mind?!
Can you make up your goddamn mind?!
I'm sorry!
I'm sorry!
Stop that!
Stop that!
What's your deal?
What's your deal?
You told me to come clean, to stop deceiving her!
You told me to come clean, to stop deceiving her!
Well, yeah... I did!
Well, yeah... I did!
What's with that confidence?!
What's with that confidence?!
I'd finally made up my mind to tell her, too!
I'd finally made up my mind to tell her, too!
You see, people have stuff going on they don't want to talk about.
You see, people have stuff going on they don't want to talk about.
Excuse me?!
Excuse me?!
Nothing's ever simple.
Nothing's ever simple.
You need to be more considerate.
You need to be more considerate.
Am I wrong?
Am I wrong?
That's rich coming from you!
That's rich coming from you!
Ow, ow, ow!
Ow, ow, ow!
You might've learned that just the other day, but I've always been aware of it!
You might've learned that just the other day, but I've always been aware of it!
I was about to tell her!
I was about to tell her!
And you'll still have to tell her one day!
And you'll still have to tell her one day!
When?
When?
When you find what it is you want to do.
When you find what it is you want to do.
Who does she think she is?!
Who does she think she is?!
No lo sé.
No lo sé.
I've had enough.
I've had enough.
Enough, enough, enough!
Enough, enough, enough!
You begged me to stay in the band, so I steeled myself to tell her.
You begged me to stay in the band, so I steeled myself to tell her.
But here's Miss Sound Argument with a last-minute one-eighty!
But here's Miss Sophistry with a last-minute one-eighty!
And Miss I-Know-How-You-Feel quietly watching on!
And Miss I-Know-How-You-Feel quietly watching on!
I'll be the one to decide my own life!
I'll be the one to decide my own life!
Leave me alone!
Leave me alone!
Subaru...
Subaru...
Was my acting good?
Was my acting good?
Gosh, I feel great!
Gosh, I feel great!
It's whatever. I figured I'd need to deal with this sooner or later.
It's whatever. I figured I'd need to deal with this sooner or later.
But for now, I'm gonna make sure you guys don't slack!
But for now, I'm gonna make sure you guys don't slack!
Let's go!
Let's go!
Next time: "Raise Your Voice"
Next time: "Raise Your Voice"